You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Poor nutrition and obesity is a problem in many developed countries and some people believe a tax on fast food would reduce the problem. Do you agree? Write at least 250 words.

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Over the
last
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two or three decades, the eating habits of
people
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all over the world have changed dramatically
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major advances in lifestyles.
As a result
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, a growing number of the population are becoming fat and not taking nutritional
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in some advanced countries. It is argued by
many
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that the problem of obesity can be reduced by imposing a tax on fast
food
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items
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. I disagree with
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point of view because
people
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are responsible for taking care of their
health
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and maintaining good eating habits. To start with, it is well said that
health
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is everything and one should understand its worth. It is totally up to the individuals what to eat or what not because at least adults are aware of the consequences of having healthy and nutritional meals.
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, if a person is obese or malnutritional, he will be advised by a doctor not to eat
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, and if the person is really worried about his well-being, he will obey the instructions doesn't matter how cheap or expensive the unhealthy
food
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is.
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, it is
people
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's own choice to maintain
food
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habits, and if they are concerned about their physical and mental
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, they will sacrifice
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not.
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, a cost on junk
food
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items
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cannot be helpful in the decline of their intake because
people
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who are addicted to fast
food
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items
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will be ready to pay some extra money for their taste.
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,
people
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prefer eating fast
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when they have a busy schedule and do not have time to prepare the
food
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. So they avoid their well-being and opt for cheap and easy options.
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, imposing a tax on
such
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food
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items
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cannot change the mindset of the public about their own
health
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.
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, I disagree with the point that the issue of obesity and lack of nutrition among
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can be tackled by imposing a tax on packaged
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whereas
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it is their own perspective whether to take care of their
health
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or not.
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, lack of time is one of the main reasons behind consuming these
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items
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, so it cannot be solved by taking
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action.
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