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some experts hold the view that it’s better for the children to start learning foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. give advantages and disadvantages.

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Over the past few decades, there is a significant change happened in the studies. It is a public opinion that-, It is good to start, kids studying foreign
languages
 in preliminary classes rather than higher secondary. Both have their own merits and demerits. In the modern era, Education plays a vital role in
children
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 life. Nowadays, literacy is of high importance in the future growth of a person
as well as
 the nation. It is always good to
study
 other
languages
 from small classes onwards. Children are like clay, we can mould them easily. If they are learning
overseas
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the overseas
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language
 at primary
school
. They can easily understand and can able to speak fluently.
For instance
, One of my friends who studied in English medium from
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 standard onwards can speak more fluent English than me. Because I started to
study
 English in secondary
school
. So obviously my friend will speak better than me. When pupils are in secondary
school
, They can easily be distracted.
However
, they have other works.
Thus
, the learning process becomes slow.
As a result
, pupils might learn a foreign
language
 but speaking will be difficult.
On the other hand
, If we
study
 foreign
languages
 in primary
school
, the native
language
 will vanish.
For Example
, nowadays, most
of
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the
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schools are implementing some methods for choosing the
language
. They are providing options for selecting a
language
, So most of the students choose other
languages
 and ignore the mother tongue.
This
 process leads to
extinction
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 of the native
language
. So Pupil should learn all
languages
 including
native
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language
To conclude
, all countries have their own culture and
language
.
This
 only makes countries different. It is important to
study
 foreign
languages
 as same as we should learn our native
language
 whether in primary or secondary
school
.
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