The charts below give information on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie illustrates the proportion of
Yemen
and Italy citizens in three different age groups between 2000 and 2050. It is clear that
percentage
of Correct article usage
the percentage
population
aged 0-14 Add an article
the population
of
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in
Yemen
and Italy tends to decrease.Meanwhile, the proportion of young
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the young
population
of Yemen
increase slightly.By contrast
, young
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the young
population
of Italy drop significantly.
In 2000,the percentage of population
aged 0-14 Add an article
the population
of
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in
Yemen
accounts for more than half,compared just
over 14% of Italy.Only a very small percentage of people in Change preposition
to just
Yemen
were over 60 at 3.6%,in contrast
to nearly a quarter of the Italy population
.The largest group for Italy was the 15-59 year with just over 60% while
Yemen
had 46,3% of its population
in this
group.
In 2050 the proportion of population
aged 15-59 Add an article
the population
year
in Fix the agreement mistake
years
Yemen
go
up significantly to 57,3%,Change the verb form
goes
in
contrast
Italy Add the comma(s)
,contrast
fall
sharply to 46,2%.the number of people in Italy over 60 years old increased to 42,3% higher than Wrong verb form
fell
Yemen
only 5,7%.At the same time, the number of people aged 0-14 in both Yemen
and Italy decreasedSubmitted by anhnguhongmai on
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