You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours suggest what should be done about the problem Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express
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grave situation that the community of "Lake West Spring" is facing
due to
the faulty and inadequate rubbish management system, especially for the
last
three to four weeks. With relation to the problems, the number of rubbish
bins
installed in the area is insufficient considering the total population.
Moreover
, for the
last
couple of weeks,
garbage
collector's lorries have not been picking up the trash in time, and
deposit
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the deposit
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of all waste has started to scatter around the
bins
or on the streets. Since the
garbage
bins
are overflowing with litter, it attracts some street dogs who rampage the
rubish
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rubbish
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every night. It has
also
become a breeding ground for mosquitoes, houseflies and other insects which can lead to the spread of infectious diseases.
Moreover
, the bad odour from
garbage
has started reaching our house which hampers our peaceful and healthy living. I would like to suggest that the local council look into the matter urgently and make sure the
garbage
lorries come to our community every other day to empty the
bins
.
Besides
, for a long-term solution, more large waste
bins
should be erected in the region as soon as possible and the
garbage
should definitely be picked up in a timely manner. I hope you will take immediate measures to solve the problems and consider my suggestions. Yours faithfully, Elmina Rose
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