You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, Explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved

Dear Mr Ali I am writing

this

to inform you,

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that I

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am sitting in the college

canteen

for lunch on a daily basis with my friends. I

notice

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the college cafeteria should be updated more. I visited the institute cafeteria

last

Friday with my friends for lunchtime. The staff of the

canteen

is very polite and

well-responsible

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, they deal with customers with respect and bring orders on time.

Furthermore

, the quality of the food is so good. I tried almost all sorts of menus at different times, and everything

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perfect as per their standard.

However

, I want to inform you that I observed a few things that need improvement.

Firstly

, the cleanliness of the cafeteria was not maintained, they

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not clean the tables after being used by any customers and I saw food around the tables on the floor. At the time of lunch, the hall of the

canteen

is almost full of customers, and

as a result

, they feel very sweaty because the air conditioners do not work properly. In my opinion, you should tell the manager of the

canteen

to maintain cleanliness every time.

Moreover

, maintenance of air conditioners should be carried out before every summer season, and more air conditioners and fans should be installed. One more thing I want to add here, please increase the menu list. Yours sincerely, Ahsan Islam