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your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he or she is doing about celebrating Nes Year in different countries. write a letter to your friend. in your letter write a letter to your friend.in your letter : 1 say how important new year is to people in your country . 2describe now new year is celebrated in your country . 3 explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your countey.

Dear Tina, I hope you're doing well. I heard about your college project on New
Year
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celebrations
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 in different countries and I'm happy to help. New
Year
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 is highly important in my country, representing fresh beginnings and leaving the past behind. It's a time for reflection and setting goals. In my country,
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the New
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Year
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 is celebrated with enthusiasm. Families and friends gather for joyous
celebrations
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. Streets are decorated with colours, and fireworks light up the sky at midnight, creating a mesmerizing display. What I love about New
Year
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celebrations
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 here is the sense of togetherness. People unite, sharing laughter, food, and well wishes. Traditional customs add a special touch, preserving our cultural heritage.
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the New
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Year
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 holds great significance in my country, symbolizing hope and renewal. Festivities involve lively gatherings and stunning fireworks. The sense of togetherness and the blend of traditions make our New
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celebrations
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 unforgettable. I hope
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 helps with your project. Best regards, Susan

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greeting and closing
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logical structure
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • significance
  • joyous
  • new beginnings
  • traditions
  • customs
  • gather
  • fireworks displays
  • resolutions
  • festive atmosphere
  • sense of hope
  • special dishes
  • exchange of gifts
  • countdown
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