Some people think that the government should use extra money to fund programs to improve the environment. Others think that it is better for the government to spend money to support artistic programs. Which option do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It has been frequently argued that the high authorities ought to invest

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the protection of

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nature,

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others opine that they should give priority to the

art work

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. From my perspective,

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nature`s preservation is far more important and the reasons for

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will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with, the surroundings in which living beings coexist,

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made to it has

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impact

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their health.

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overpopulation and its increasing demand

leads

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to

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up of more industries,

whereas

the emission of harmful

gases

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an adverse effect on the citizens.

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, after the industrial revolution, the proportion of patients suffering from respiratory diseases

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drastically surged.

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, the deforestation done for the construction of residential

area

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had

distrupted

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disrupted

the natural cycle for

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of carbon dioxide into oxygen.

Therefore

, the breathing process of human beings is high

due to

disturbance by the world.

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overusage

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also

affecting

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mankind in many ways.

Initially

, the emission of deadly

gases

from electronic gadgets is cause for the biggest threat to the Earth.

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refrigerators, air conditioners and other appliances

relase

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release

carbon

monooxide

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monoxide

mono oxide

and other

gases

into the air,

however

, these

gases

lead to

depletion

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of

ozone

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the ozone

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layer, and

this

layer is the most significant protection of the globe. To put it forth, the hole in the outer layer of the motherland could not completely reflect back the harmful ultraviolet

radiations

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radiation

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, these are responsible for the deadliest skin cancer. In conclusion, there is no doubt artistic programs could play a significant role to enhance

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beauty of

atmosphere

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conservation is more necessary at

this

moment. It is clearly evident that

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human survival is facing

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a plethora of problems

due to

exploitation

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the exploitation

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of natural

phenomenon

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, so the federal body ought to conserve it.