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some peopole believe that all children should learn a foreign language form the time they start schools while others feel it is better to wait until a child is at seconday school

In today's globalized economy, the ability to speak a
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language
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 is more useful than ever before.
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 some believe that
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, would only start to learn a foreign
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 at secondary
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, I side with those who feel the learning process should begin the moment
children
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 enter the education system. On the one hand, it could be argued that the study of foreign languages should wit. Those in favour of shostmpnement argue that young
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children
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 already have a timetable
that is
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 fit to burst and learning how to read, write and count should take precedence over
second
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language
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. In short, they feel that the native
language
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 should come first. What is more, they
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 argue that only a small minority of
children
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 will ever actually need to use a
second
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language
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, so it is a waste of time teaching a skill that for many will be redundant later in life.
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, I side with those who believe that
second
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language
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 learning should begin at primary
school
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. It is a fact that the earlier a child learns a
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, the more proficiently they will eventually be able to speak it. Research has shown that before puberty,
children
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 have a unique ability to acquire languages by simply being exposed to them, which is a skill that ends in adolescence.
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, in my opinion,
children
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 who learn at an early age often lack the fear associated with speaking in a foreign tongue.
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, they
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 not self-conscious when trying to pronounce foreign sounds.
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, perhaps my strongest argument for starting early is that learning a foreign
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 provides
children
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 with a range of other cognitive skills. Bilingual
children
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 are known to perform better in problem-solving tasks and have more creativity than their monolingual counterparts, which are desirable skills for
children
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 of any age. In conclusion,
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 young
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 already have full timetables, learning a foreign
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 many positive cognitive side effects on a child's
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 education.
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, on balance, I strongly believe that
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 should start learning a
second
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language
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 at primary
school
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 rather than secondary
school
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.

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