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Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In
this
 fast-growing world, many people choose to move abroad, for a more advanced level of education
as well as
 greener pastures.
However
, a few set of individuals state that it is better to work in the same
country
 as they believe it is their social responsibility. In
this
 essay, I will be discussing both views,
along with
 my opinion. The fresh graduates of the modern generation have a broader aspect of the future, wanting them to
re-locate
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relocate
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 to foreign nations in order to pursue their ambitions.
This
 gives them opportunities at a wider pace and an international experience both in the field of education
as well as
 profession.
Hence
, they prefer moving out of their home city so as to gain the best of the best in what they do.
This
 situation can be better explained by the UK-based research organization named- The VFS, which that stated 60% of the latest
immigration
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immigrants
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 done for job visas are recent graduates, and the other 40% account for advanced working professionals.
However
, there are few individuals who believe in the fact that they are liable towards the
country
 in which they have learned their professional skills. These set of people want to work for the betterment of their nations.
Moreover
, they aim at the
overall
 development of the
country
.
For instance
, a powerful team of medical practitioners, IT developers and an engineer can bring a massive change in the rural area.
Thus
, leading to development in areas where life is comparatively harder than in the city.
To sum up
, in my opinion, it is a better idea to serve the nation keeping in mind the
overall
 growth of your ambitions and the
country
 as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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