Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of this type of shopping outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, it the world
have
become an trend of buying Change the verb form
has
a
goods Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
from
online which Change preposition
apply
have
made Correct subject-verb agreement
has
a
life easy Remove the article
apply
as well as
fast according, to me it has more advantages then
disadvantages. From the viewpoint of Replace the word
than
a
Correct article usage
the
internet
Add a comma
,
have
become a small market which even supports local shopkeeper.
As Change the verb form
has
a
Correct article usage
apply
people
are buying from the internet
this
save
Change the verb form
saves
there
time and Replace the word
their
a
money. If a Remove the article
apply
person
want
Change the verb form
wants
somthing
from Correct your spelling
something
a
another country Remove the article
apply
then
they does
not need to go there and buy that but can order that online and can get it easily. Change the verb form
do
Firstly
, the main advantage is a people
have accept
that Change the verb form
accepted
a
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the
internet
Capitalize word
Internet
have
made things better compare to Change the verb form
has
past
. Some time community claim A Correct article usage
the past
people
can buy things online such
as books, pens, clothes, tickets, and groceries.
Secondly
, a person
can get services also
online from another part of a nation. For example
,if student
Correct article usage
a student
want
to get Change the verb form
wants
a books
and Correct the article-noun agreement
books
a book
want
to attend a class, it is easy to get that online. Correct subject-verb agreement
wants
In addition
As purchasing from a
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the
internet
helps many Capitalize word
Internet
people
to get jobs. If a person
will buy good from outside the country than
it help to grow a relationship between the nation Correct your spelling
then
as well as
also
benefits for the economy. Person
will travel less than less resources will use limited.
In conclusion, from the above Fix the agreement mistake
People
explain
it can be said that as Replace the word
explanation
Internet
Add an article
the Internet
have
made our life better there are more benefits. Change the verb form
has
Hence
, purchasing online have, the
advantage of Correct article usage
apply
this
type of shopping have outweighed the disadvantages. As it have
more benefits government should encourage and support that.Change the verb form
has
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