In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything, they want online without paying. To extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some
people
believe that the
internet
can
broad cast
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news
speedy. Somebody outlook for free
e-
books
and online
newspaper
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newspapers
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will substitute printed ones.
However
, the issue is not entirely
straight forward
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straightforward
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, and arguments can
also
be made against the idea.
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essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view. proponent
assert
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that if
people
do not purchase
magazine
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magazines
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and
newspaper
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newspapers
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, usage of
paper
will decrease.so, the forest will not vanish.
For example
, annually lots of trees are logged in order to produce
paper
and deforestation consequent is increasing of global warming.
Furthermore
,
people
can download free
e-
books
and study whenever they want. It means that accessing
to
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these
books
is very easy.
For instance
, they could be read on the trip or the
airplane
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.
In addition
, by searching online
news
you can find
news
throw various
source
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sources
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very fast,
whereas
for finding
news
by
newspaper
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a newspaper
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you have to buy some
newspaper
.
For example
,
unemployed
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the unemployed
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can detect several job offers
by
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on
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the
Internet
and choose
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their favorite
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favorite
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job by search engine without buying a
newspaper
.
On the other hand
, opponents claim that they could not study relevant with laptops or mobile because screen light rays hurt their eyes and
this
matter will have
drawback
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drawbacks
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on students’ eyes health.
For instance
, trainees claim that they don’t feel comfortable with
e-
books
and prefer to utilize
paper
books
because they cannot read and note on them.
Moreover
, technophobes cannot communicate with online
medias
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media
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.
Also
, some
people
live
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who live
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backlash do not have access to
internet
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the internet
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.
Therefore
,
people
have to use printed
books
and
newspaper
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newspapers
show examples
. In conclusion,
however
, online
books
and
news
have advantages
such
as
reduce
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paper
consumption and wood and rapid approachability to the
news
, but
tradition
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books
have their own benefits
such
as technophobes and pupils and someone who
do
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does
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not have
internet
access can be
proper
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the proper
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choice. It seems that nowadays,
e-
books
and online
news
are
economical
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more economical
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than
paper
products and have low ecological pollution and can be
appropriate
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an appropriate
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option.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancements
  • Digital content
  • Environmental concerns
  • Tactile experience
  • Production costs
  • Distribution costs
  • Digital divide
  • Digital fatigue
  • Print media
  • Credibility
  • Permanence
  • Collectibility
  • Aesthetic value
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