The car is possibly the most convenient and popular way of getting from A to B. However, due to its impact on the environment and the risk it poses to pedestrians and motorists, governments should take urgent steps to reduce our dependency on this mode of transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Own private transport is the easiest way and most prominent way to reach your destination from one place to another and

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the harm to the ozone

layer

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the government should take action against drivers to protect the

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.I partially agree with the statement because private transport is vital for society and the

environment

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is more important to remain safe in the future.

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with, The first statement is that cars or motorcycles are better than cycles or electric transports,

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however

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I am not a huge fan of diesel or petrol motors.

People

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buy

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for their time saving

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you will get it cheaper as compared to electric transports.

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don't pay attention to the main problem which is hower health

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people

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utilize these motors for small distances

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we can look at the pollution and how it's affecting the

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why we should use these for a long journey only.

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, Government should take a double tax on

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to stop these from using poisonous gases which cause tears in protect circle of the

environment

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if the ozone layer is removed from the

world

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no one will live in

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world

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,

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, the prime minister of a country gives an idea to how to abstain from these dangerous four wheels machineries.

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, leaders of the

world

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can take certain measures to remain cool with

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error by shutting down a number of factories and transport which is not electric even, make compulsory for

people

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to ride bicycles if they want to go for a few miles or go by walk.

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,

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time

people

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should use their brains to how to stop future issues that we can do by contemplating the

environment

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and I am holding the opinion which is members of parliament should debate

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and create new laws and rules to obtain positive results and in the end, use social media to warn

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with

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gigantic issue which is made by

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mistakes.