The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The diagram delineates the type of transportation citizens of a European country used to travel to and from their workplaces in three different years - 1960, 1980 and 2000. As an
overall
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trend,
cars
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gained huge popularity as a
mode
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of commuting,
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buses
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lost their appeal as a viable
mode
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of communication for these Europeans. As the diagram suggests, around four out of ten of these Europeans used
buses
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to reach their offices and to get back homes in 1960. Tubes were the second most preferred
mode
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of transportation as more than 25% of people took
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form of vehicle. Interestingly, Only around one in every 18 people used
cars
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to travel,
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, trains were preferred by roughly 18% of citizens for commuting to and from offices. After two decades, trains and personal
cars
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gained demand as more than half of the population used these two forms of transport. Tubes and
buses
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retained less proportion of commuters
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year and
buses
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seem like lost their attraction as a
mode
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of transportation.
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, in 2000, more than one-third of these Europeans started using
cars
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only 15% of them used
buses
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to travel to and from their workplaces. Tubes retained almost one-fourth of the commuters,
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train usage stood just above 20%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, mode, buses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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