You rented a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a letter to inform the company and in your letter.- Explain when and from where you rented it -Describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you about an
accident
that took place yesterday
while
I was driving the
car
rented from your company.
To begin
with, I took a blue sedan, Suzuki, in your central Moscow office on 4th January 2024. There I signed a rental contract, which number is 299889. As for the
accident
, it took place 2 hours later. I was heading for Odintsovo in the suburbs of Moscow, following the required speed limit, when just before the left turn to Odintsovo a cat ran on the road. Trying to avoid a major
accident
, I turned immediately and met the edge of the fence. Regrettably, it led to
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minor damage to the
car
. Describing the
car
’s condition, only two small scratches on the right door were visible. I did not see any other problems, even though I examined the
car
closely. Provided that there were no victims of the
accident
, I continued my trip and left the
car
at your Odintsovo office at 7 pm. The manager who took keys from me said that no immediate payments were required and that I had to write a letter
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the situation. Please inform me about the following steps that should be taken from my side. If any additional details are required, do not hesitate to contact me. Thank you for your prompt consideration of
this
matter. I look forward to your response. Yours sincerely, Helen Ten
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Make sure to provide explicit information about the actions taken immediately following the accident, as the task specifically asks for this.
coherence cohesion
Consider organizing the letter into clear paragraphs that each focus on a particular aspect of the situation.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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