Some students take one year off between school and university. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

There is no denying the fact that the phenomenon of

year

gaps. Is ubiquitous across the globe

due to

its paramount importance.

One

school of thought opines that it is worthless.

However

, others consider that a couple of problems

also

occur because of the same. It seems to me,

although

this

has a plethora of merits, numerous demerits are

also

there which will be elaborated on in upcoming paragraphs. There is a myriad of reasons which will

further

explain

this

argument but the most preponderant

one

stems from the fact that

year

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gap after school helps

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the student

a student

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student

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students

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to explore their interest because most students when they have graduated from school don’t have a plan

what

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for what

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they want to be or to study.

Hence

, that

year

will give them

chance

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to discover themselves and their interests. Another pivotal aspect of

this

argument is that if students have been taking

one

year

free from studying between

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levels, they might find

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jobs

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and earn some money which can help them

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tuition fees and even help their families especially who have poverty case.

Finally

,

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and meeting new people from different cultures could be improved

one

’s personality. To support

this

idea these benefits are convincing.

However

, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments, and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of

this

trend. The first negative factor is

the

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almost all individuals find it

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difficult to get back

studying

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to studying

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at universities or colleges; as,

one

year

is good enough to forget the emotions of studying,

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exams

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, and homework,

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they feel it is hard to have passion

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for

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education again.

Moreover

, after getting a job and starting

earning

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to earn

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money, they may think highly education

unimportant

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, so they will lose their encourage forward joining to university.

This

leads us

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apply

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to the final, and perhaps

most

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significant drawback is

,

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if

student

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a student

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does not plan carefully that

year

;

consequently

, it could lose and waste time.

This

argument

also

appears to be quite powerful.

To conclude

, without any doubt,

this

is a mixed bag. If

this

topic has many positives

then

the negative points of

this

nation may not be underestimated.