Some students take one year off between school and university. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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There is no denying the fact that the phenomenon of
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its paramount importance.
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school of thought opines that it is worthless.
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, others consider that a couple of problems
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occur because of the same. It seems to me,
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this
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has a plethora of merits, numerous demerits are
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there which will be elaborated on in upcoming paragraphs. There is a myriad of reasons which will
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explain
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argument but the most preponderant
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stems from the fact that
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year
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gap after school helps
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the student
a student
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student
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students
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to explore their interest because most students when they have graduated from school don’t have a plan
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for what
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they want to be or to study.
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, that
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will give them
chance
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a chance
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to discover themselves and their interests. Another pivotal aspect of
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argument is that if students have been taking
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year
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free from studying between
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studies
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levels, they might find
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jobs
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and earn some money which can help them
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with
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tuition fees and even help their families especially who have poverty case.
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,
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and meeting new people from different cultures could be improved
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’s personality. To support
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idea these benefits are convincing.
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, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments, and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of
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trend. The first negative factor is
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almost all individuals find it
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difficult to get back
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to studying
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at universities or colleges; as,
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year
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is good enough to forget the emotions of studying,
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exams
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, and homework,
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and
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they feel it is hard to have passion
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education again.
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, after getting a job and starting
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to earn
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money, they may think highly education
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, so they will lose their encourage forward joining to university.
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leads us
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to the final, and perhaps
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significant drawback is
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if
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a student
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does not plan carefully that
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;
consequently
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, it could lose and waste time.
This
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argument
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appears to be quite powerful.
To conclude
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, without any doubt,
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is a mixed bag. If
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topic has many positives
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the negative points of
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nation may not be underestimated.
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