The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012.

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The line graph illustrates the number of crime incidents for 3 different categories in New Port City between 2003 to 2012.

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, it can be clearly seen that robbery occurred at a low level as compared to other offences,

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burglary was the major issue in 2000. In terms of house-breaking , it has been observed that more than 3000 cases were reported in the year 2000, which grew in the following year by 400 or 500 ,

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with dramatic

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these numbers hit below 1500 only.

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after a small rose in 2005 , remained between 1000 to 1500 for the next 4 years.

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, from 2000 to 2012 more than 2500 car theft has been reported. After a minor drop in 2013, a general climb has been seen. Moving to robberies, relatively few numbers of stealing were counted over the 10 years period, the rate accounted from 500 to 1000.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

154 words

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The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012.

a lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main course of income. unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctry. what are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

Although many people value public parks, this space could be better used for the other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and build economics. To what extend do you agree or dis agree with this statement.