In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehical will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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is a century of development technologies. Nowadays,

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vehicles like

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auromobiles

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automobiles

and trucks are nothing new to our society.

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positive effect on our lives or more negative

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? On the one hand, there are lots of advantages. First of all,

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time and energy.

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or other transport we spent our energy to be concentrated on

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traffic signs carefully and

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safely. In

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computer

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do everything for us, they provide us

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and safety.

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preferable, because they can't break the driving rules. On

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hand, there are some disadvantages. When

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will be popular, it will be no need

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personal drivers,

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case will cut some workplaces. To add to

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, but if a robot in

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is broken, it will put some risk

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passengers

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lives and

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health.

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, when you drive a car you are able to

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it, when a robot drives, you should trust a computer, for some

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it can be difficult to get used

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there are more disadvantages than advantages. I believe that in

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modern

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our people are not ready for

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cars, in the future everything can change.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehical will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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