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The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001

The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001
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The graph gives information about the number of
people
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 living in each home in the United Kingdom between 1981 and 2001.
Overall
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, in both periods there was a similar tendency in which just a little number of residences were occupied by many
people
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whereas
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 the majority of the
homes
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 were occupied by 3 or less than 3
people
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.
In addition
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 to
this
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, it can be seen a considerable increase in the number of
homes
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 occupied by 2 and 1 person respectively in 2001. To start with, in 1981, 6
homes
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 were occupied by 6
people
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,
while
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 only 8 were occupied by 5. There was
also
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 the 4-
people
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 household, which represented 18
homes
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,
while
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 17
houses
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 were inhabited by only 1 person.
Subsequently
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, the 2-
people
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 household was the most common with a rate of 31
houses
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 in total, being in the second position those
houses
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 whit 3 persons, representing 20 in total.
On the other hand
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, in 2001,
houses
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 occupied by 6
people
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 decreased considerably to only 2 units,
whereas
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 the 5-person household slightly decreased from 8 in 1981 to 6 in 2001. The accommodations occupied by 3 persons
also
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 went down by only 3 units of difference, being 15 in total.
Besides
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this
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, the 4-
people
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 accommodation
also
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 experienced a downtrend with 17
homes
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 in total.
However
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, 2
people
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 per home was still the most popular rate, increasing
this
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 year to 34. Despite 1981, the second position changed compared to 2001 as there was a significant increase in single
houses
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, in which 26
homes
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 were inhabited by only 1 person.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, whereas, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, homes, houses with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "considerable" was used 2 times.
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