The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist's work after five years.
The given pie chart demonstrates that the sociology students of a university after completing the degree programme have been involved in a variety of destinations
while
the other table displays the earnings of sociologists in different three occupations in the 5 years later.
Overall
, it can be seen that the degree holders engaged the full-time work after the
graduation more than the other working types. Correct article usage
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According to
the details of the second table, most postgraduates who worked in the government sector gained a considerable basic salary more than other occupations.
It is evident that a significant amount of bachelor
of just finished degrees joined to work in permanent jobs over the other types of working sectors. Fix the agreement mistake
bachelors
Nonetheless
, it recorded as 52%. Conversely
, a substantial percentage of degree holders who completed the course in psychology,
chose to work in part-time jobs Remove the comma
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while
about 5% of bachelors were starting to do their postgraduate studies while
doing part-time occupations. It would be a tiny proportion compared with others.
The noticeable trend is the highest range of psychologists entered the government sectors
after Fix the agreement mistake
sector
the
5 years from graduation with a considerable per cent of salary increment. Correct article usage
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Whereas
, they obtained more than 100,000 salaries per month. Moreover
, postgraduates employers worked as freelance consultants and as employers of private companies respectively 40% and 30%. They also
could be got more than 100,000 payments monthly. Besides
, they worked for a salary of 50,000 and 75,000 from 5% and 15% proportions sequently of the aforementioned categories.Submitted by yohanigallage99 on
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