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Many parents today pay for private tutors to teach their children after school hours. Do you think this is a positive or negative development？

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We know very well that in
this
 competitive ,era parents want their
children
 to do their best in their life and for that education is the key.So, they want their
children
 to come first in their studies so they spend extra
money
 on their tuition maybe it has some demerits. To commence with, The first and foremost reason is that every parent wants that their
children
 to do their best in their academic career
due to
 they forced them to study if they want or not
Children
 are going to school for 6-7 hours a day and it was too much for them after that
also
 parents hired their tuition teacher for extra classes.
For example
; One of my friends went to their spoken English class after school and he told me that he is getting tired of
this
as well as
 it's become a burden for him.
Moreover
, Some times it impacts his health.
Secondly
, To give the continuation of my thought another reason is that it is beneficial for teachers because it is an easier way to earn extra
money
.
Thus
, they are never denied extra classes but the student getting impacted by
this
.They became very stubborn sometimes because of
the
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 tiredness.
Furthermore
, it is not
good
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 way to spend
money
 for supplementary studies.
For example
, One of my
teacher
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 going for extra classes
as a consequence
 of he earn very well but he is not able to give more time to his family so some kind of it is not
good
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 impact for him.
To sum up
, Talking about
this
 view paying extra
money
 for tuition is a totally negative impact on
children
along with
 the teachers
also
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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