Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. .
Nowadays , achieving high salaries is became increasingly popular .
Although
, group
of Correct article usage
a group
people
believe that it is good to adjust to all problem
like unfulfilled jobs or low Fix the agreement mistake
problems
financial
. Other Replace the word
finances
group
think the best is to put an effort into developing Change the wording
groups
lifestyle
. To form a judicious opinion discussion is essential , where Correct article usage
a lifestyle
i
stand with the second group .
On the one hand of the argument , living Change the capitalization
I
condition
require Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
people
commuting
to work Change the verb form
to commute
everyday
and make no choice Replace the word
every day
to
accept their unsatisfied Correct word choice
but to
career
. Fix the agreement mistake
careers
Moreover
, people
have a responsibility toward their families and leaving their profession will aggregate their debts . For example
, family
who Add an article
the family
a family
insert
their child Change the verb form
inserts
in
a private school will undergo Change preposition
into
a
fate of Correct article usage
the
bankrupt
by losing their source of income.
Replace the word
bankruptcy
On the other hand
of the argument, these issues can be solved in many approaches. Firstly
, this
crisis of shortage money
should not prohibit a person from seeking an Change preposition
of money
advance
academic degree Replace the word
advanced
hence
the government present some financial subsidises
and support their national citizens . Correct your spelling
subsidies
Consequently
, people
with high academic degrees and have
Unnecessary verb
apply
a
practical experience have Correct article usage
apply
a
potential of getting a high salary and diverse jobs, Correct article usage
the
secondly
, success need more patience and insistence and even an individual are being
stressed and Unnecessary verb
apply
tensed
Wrong verb form
tense
in
work , they should be consistent and burden their horizons to approve himself because workplace Change preposition
at
become
more Change the verb form
becomes
competetive
. Correct your spelling
competitive
For instance
, last
study
In conclusion , it is undoubtedly that Correct article usage
the last
accept
harsh Wrong verb form
accepting
condition
may Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
Exacerbating
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Exacerbate
Change noun form
people's
people
psychological matter
. From my perspective , Fix the agreement mistake
matters
i
believe encourage individuals to be more active and Change the capitalization
I
perserverance
to develop Correct your spelling
perseverance
there
Correct your spelling
their
skill
and knowledge since desirable results and creativity enhance personal Fix the agreement mistake
skills
budget
Fix the agreement mistake
budgets
anormously
.Correct your spelling
enormously
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