Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. .

Nowadays , achieving high salaries is became increasingly popular .

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of

people

believe that it is good to adjust to all

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problems

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like unfulfilled jobs or low

financial

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. Other

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think the best is to put an effort into developing

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a lifestyle

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. To form a judicious opinion discussion is essential , where

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stand with the second group . On the one hand of the argument , living

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require

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to work

everyday

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and make no choice

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but to

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accept their unsatisfied

career

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.

Moreover

,

people

have a responsibility toward their families and leaving their profession will aggregate their debts .

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family

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who

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their child

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a private school will undergo

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fate of

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by losing their source of income.

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of the argument, these issues can be solved in many approaches.

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this

crisis of shortage

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of money

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should not prohibit a person from seeking an

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academic degree

hence

the government present some financial

subsidises

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and support their national citizens .

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people

with high academic degrees and

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a

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practical experience have

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potential of getting a high salary and diverse jobs,

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, success need more patience and insistence and even an individual are

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stressed and

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in

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work , they should be consistent and burden their horizons to approve himself because workplace

become

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more

competetive

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competitive

.

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study In conclusion , it is undoubtedly that

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harsh

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may

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people

psychological

matter

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. From my perspective ,

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believe encourage individuals to be more active and

perserverance

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perseverance

to develop

there

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their

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skill

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and knowledge since desirable results and creativity enhance personal

budget

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anormously

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enormously

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