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community's
life.Society shares Correct article usage
the community's
to
two Change preposition
with
team
about highway data. Some Change to a plural noun
teams
community
tend to think that all of humanity should get a free allowance to virtual Fix the agreement mistake
communities
community
, Fix the agreement mistake
communities
whereas
others critize
authority and ask to make it possible for citizens who pay for it.From my own perspective, humans that fee for obtaining hypertext documents should get an allowance and it will be discussed in Correct your spelling
criticise
this
essay.
It is clealy
that Correct your spelling
clearly
clear
Internet
provides Correct article usage
the Internet
human's
life with almost everything.Change noun form
human
Community
receive chance
to extend their acknowledges about Add an article
a chance
the chance
world
.It will not be a Add an article
the world
peace
of cake to do duties through reality rather than Correct your spelling
piece
with
cyberspace.Change preposition
in
Also
, with the assist
of data Replace the word
assistance
highway
it would be helpful Add a comma
,highway
especially
for females.Add the comma(s)
,especially
For instance
, they are able make
online shopping or purchase food sources, etc. .That's why, whenever or wherever you are Add the particle
to make
assist
Replace the word
assistance
of
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on
Internet
always will be needed.In Add an article
the Internet
such
way
, some Correct article usage
a way
nation
ask Fix the agreement mistake
nations
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the authority
authority
to make it available for everyone.
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authorities
On the other hand
, there are several drawbacks of
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to
its'
availability.If people get that opportunity , it will navigate to numerous issues Correct your spelling
its
as
addiction to virtual goods like Correct quantifier usage
such as
smartphone
, Fix the agreement mistake
smartphones
laptop
and etc. . Nations should know about Fix the agreement mistake
laptops
such
cons and concentrate on thier
real life or they can destroy their reality and will not be able to do duties Correct your spelling
their
by
their ability.Change preposition
to
Thefore
, the government should make its' price more affordable .
Taking all things into account, it is much more advantageous to make it underpriced .In conclusion, I believe that Internet has a good opportunity and humanity should utilize it more Correct your spelling
Therefore
thoutfully
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thoughtfully
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
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- moreover
- also
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- however
- although
- even though
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