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In some countries, owing a home rather than renting is very important. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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In
this
 era, Having an own pace is best to be comfortable than being under lease. so in todays topic it's all about that the few countries believe that having an own home is necessary than being dweller. In my opinion, I believe that it's a positive trend ,Since it has many advantages than a disadvantage. One of the main reasons, why it is declared as a positive trend is because it can save some bucks in tax.
For example
: The Government reduce percentage in tax for individuals when they apply for a home loan . It's one of the best tax reduction method that followed by many citizens.
Whereas
 it
also
 benefits us in future by having an asset in our name so if there an emergency we can use it. Thats why people often consider owning a home is better than being under lease.
Furthermore
, I agree with the statement because he/she can do any alterations on shelter and based on the space they can
also
 add any facility
that is
 needed for them.
For instance
: In few property there won't be a hooks on wall, in that case if he is an dweller, they need to ask permission ,
Whereas
 an owner they can do anything and even add extra facility like faucet in their garden. Staying in lease always feels like we are under control and obey the rules drafted by an owner.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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