Air tranport is increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to other countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say this is good but other believe the use air transport for this purpose is not justified. Discuss both veiws and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, there is a debate on whether should

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and greens be transported by plane or not. Even though it is costly,

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giving my own opinion. On the one side, there are many reasons for people to not support transporting by air. One notable thing is that it increases item prices. Since additional

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are added, fresh vegetables and

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will become more expensive than ever.

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, in many Western countries, 1 kilogram of apples

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worth a few dollars, but in Asia, it can cost thrice as much and vice versa.

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, consumers would choose local or seasonal ones which

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budget-affordable On the

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, there are people who support the use of air transport. What I mean about it is that they can have more options to choose from. Because

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and vegetables can be transported by air, even

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ones can be available on the shelf. Take Big C, a superstore in Vietnam

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, people can find

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and vegetables ranging from winter to summer season.

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, it can bring profit to the country. By exporting local, exotic fruit to another region, not only farmers can earn more money, but their country can

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become well-known for a specific fruit. In conclusion, there are reasons to support or disapproval

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the drawbacks. It is recommended that governments should find a way to cut down the fees

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Sustainability
Carbon footprint
Global supply chain
Perishable goods
Food miles
Culinary diversity
Seasonal produce
Environmental implications
Ecological footprint
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Global warming
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