Air tranport is increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to other countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say this is good but other believe the use air transport for this purpose is not justified. Discuss both veiws and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there is a debate on whether should
fruits
and greens be transported by plane or not. Even though it is costly,
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I agree with
this
viewpoint.
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giving my own opinion. On the one side, there are many reasons for people to not support transporting by air. One notable thing is that it increases item prices. Since additional
cost
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such
as
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are added, fresh vegetables and
fruits
will become more expensive than ever.
For example
, in many Western countries, 1 kilogram of apples
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worth a few dollars, but in Asia, it can cost thrice as much and vice versa.
As a result
, consumers would choose local or seasonal ones which
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budget-affordable On the
otherside
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, there are people who support the use of air transport. What I mean about it is that they can have more options to choose from. Because
fruits
and vegetables can be transported by air, even
outseasoned
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ones can be available on the shelf. Take Big C, a superstore in Vietnam
for example
, people can find
fruits
and vegetables ranging from winter to summer season.
Furthermore
, it can bring profit to the country. By exporting local, exotic fruit to another region, not only farmers can earn more money, but their country can
also
become well-known for a specific fruit. In conclusion, there are reasons to support or disapproval
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this
topic, but the advantages
outweight
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outweigh
the drawbacks. It is recommended that governments should find a way to cut down the fees
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transportation
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  • Sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Global supply chain
  • Perishable goods
  • Food miles
  • Culinary diversity
  • Seasonal produce
  • Environmental implications
  • Ecological footprint
  • Renewable energy sources
  • Green technology
  • Supply and demand
  • Affordability
  • Out-of-season
  • Global warming
  • Air freight
  • Locavore
  • Seasonal eating
  • Technological advancements
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