Some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The healthcare

system

is one of the most crucial

government

areas

; its efficiency influences not only the population`s

health

and

wellbeing

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but

also

the region`s rates of liveability and

citizens

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. There are some who believe that investments in the healthcare

system

should be a priority for governments at the expense of other

areas

such

as education and infrastructure.

Although

I understand that maintaining

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functioning

health

system

is vital for the growth and thriving of a region, I completely disagree that other

areas

should be underinvested. It is undeniable that the

health

department should be one of the

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high priorities as it affects every single individual living in that particular area.

Additionally

, the majority of the population usually cannot afford

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private

health

insurance. If a

government

succeed in keeping the

health

system

working in an efficient and

effect

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way, it is likely that most of its citizens would be rapidly treated and more people would be willing to move out to that place meaning

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tax revenue.

However

, there are other

areas

that are equally important and directly impact

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the population`s

health

and

wellbeing

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. When considering the

health

and

wellbeing

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well-being

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of a person, it is important to consider factors

such

as pollution and education. If the

government

does not take care of the region`s infrastructure, issues

such

as air pollution can negatively impact

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the hospitals` capacity as more people would present respiratory illnesses. Another crucial area for investment is education, as research shows that

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educated population is more likely to develop sustainable

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health

habits,

consequently

reducing the strain on the

health

sector. The administration of a city, state or country requires a high level of administration skills but

also

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the

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location and its needs in order to prioritise investments and efforts.

To conclude

, even though investment in the healthcare

system

is crucial for the population`s well-being, I believe that it should not happen at the expense of other sectors. Governments

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to be able to understand the priorities and invest

accordingly

.