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Some people think that music plays an important role in society other think it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, people think that an important role in society is
music
 but others think
music
 is only considered a form of entertainment. In
this
 essay, I will write down my opinion and I will give the points of both views. I will totally agree with the idea that
music
 is an important thing for society.
Firstly
, it helps dispel suffering, brings joy, youthfulness and
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 of life.
Besides
, there is soft
music
 for everyone to listen to when working or there is funny
music
 that people can turn on to listen to when having fun.
Secondly
,
music
 can
also
 have a great impact on human development.
For example
, pregnant women often let unborn babies listen to
music
 right from the time they are in the womb, which will help them to form and develop better thinking.
On the other hand
, there are some ideas to express the second point of view in
this
 essay. Currently,
music
 activities are often held in the summer so that pupils
as well as
 students can participate in long vacations.
For example
, RapViet and The Voice are two programs held regularly for people to have the opportunity to show their talent and passion for
music
.
Moreover
, thanks to those entertainment
music
 programs, we have more young singers so that they can achieve their dreams and compose more good works. In conclusion,
music
 is an important part of our lives, it can help us relieve stress and help us achieve our passion for singing.
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