Social media addiction: Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the era of globalization and modern
technologies
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,technologies
people
and children are becoming addicted to social networks. Many individuals believe that social medias
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media
such
as Facebook have adverse
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an adverse
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effects
people
's lives, and I partially agree with this
statement. The objective of this
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the benefits
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In other words
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this
, people
can contact their relatives and friends with whom they have lost connection, nowadays technology has improved so much that we can find anyone on the web only knowing their name and surname. In consequence, inhabitants find their old acquaintances anew and do not cut off contact with people
they cannot meet in life.
On the other
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majority
of social media users almost do not live in their real life, they do not meet up with their friends and family. Correct article usage
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For instance
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To sum up
, all aforementioned
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the aforementioned
people
with big problems with health and communication with society in real life. As far as I am concerned, if people
had not been that addicted to their phones, the problem would be easily solved.Submitted by amina07id on
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