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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions, like nurses, doctors, and teachers. Some people think it is fully justified, while others believe it is unfair. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Professional
sports
 athletes earn a lot of money during their prime compared to other professionals
such
 as teachers, doctors, nurses, and lawyers.
This
 phenomenon has been ongoing for decades, and many people asking whether their salary is fair enough in our society.
To begin
 with,
sports
 is all about business, and athletes are contracted for certain periods which are recorded as intangible assets in their financial statements to generate
revenue
 because of their actions in the field, supporters come from around the world to watch their performance.
Besides
,
sports
 clubs
also
 sell their broadcasting rights to television stations to produce income. Money collected from selling tickets and broadcasting rights is their main
revenue
 to finance their expenditure, including the player’s salary.
For example
,
at the end
 of season 2021/22, AC Milan’s
revenue
 from these segments amounts to $300 million dollars, and 70% of their expenses were spent on the salaries of their players. In the professional field, no private companies have the willingness to pay millions of dollars to pay wages just for one employee per year because their main objective is to maximize the owner’s wealth, and
this
 condition has led to a corporation stipulating their ceiling salaries.
Similarly
, there is no teacher in
this
 world who obtain millions of euro for their dedication because of the limited budget in
revenue
 and expenditure for each country. In conclusion, I contend that high earnings for professional athletes are fair enough because they are working for
sports
 clubs with high
revenue
 to entertain the public, meanwhile other professional does not earn high salaries because of the limited budget of their employer.
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