In many countries, there are a lot of students who commit suicide each year. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions?

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the phenomenon that has been brought into focus is that a high proportion of the young generation intends to take their own lives annually. Some would concur that losing control over life and bearing high pressure from

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and surrounding communities are held accountable for

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problem. To curb the suicide rate,

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and

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could provide a course of action. It is well known that

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interfere too much in their children’s lives and that societies putting too much pressure on children would highly correlate with a high rate of self-destruction. First and foremost,

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may perceive

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more experienced than their children in decision-making processes, which could

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their children’s arguments in discussions.

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action would create a sense of unrespected in their adolescents, triggering the use of misbehaviour as a means of expressing their independence.

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, societies would impose high pressure on young generations to achieve excellent performance, creating emotional stress and deteriorating behaviour. To illustrate, in South Korea,

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intensive studying to get high scores on university entrance exams, various students are diagnosed with symptoms of mental disorders. It is unchallengeable that misbehaviours and mental exhaustion are the sources of self-destruction. There are several actions that

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and

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could offer to address the described problem.

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,

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would involve their children in making

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process.

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of exercising too much control over their offspring,

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would offer them advice and cooperate with them to achieve goals.

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, in

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models,

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would be encouraged to participate in orientation days with their adolescents to define careers.

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,

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can ensure that students have access to

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confidential sources of help. Telephone hotlines set a good example for authorities’ efforts to support younger generations. It seems quite clear that both

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and

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take the course of action simultaneously to prevent suicide. In conclusion, it is vital to acknowledge that over-controlled attitudes from

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and pressures from

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would be the roots of deteriorating behaviours. To decline suicidal tendencies, families and authorities should

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in the best interests of their students.