Some people think that news and media are affecting our life in a positive way while others disagree. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.

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It seems that in today’s world, different people have opposite opinions on how
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and
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influence us. From my perspective, I believe nowadays, the way
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and
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are presented to us has detrimental effects, and I will discuss my thoughts in the following paragraphs.
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, day-to-day
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and
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give us too much
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that we cannot digest effectively and discern whether there’s misinformation and if the
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sources are reliable.
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, people have various channels to receive
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, including mobile phone apps, websites, radio, newspapers, etc.
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it is easier and more convenient for us to access
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and knowledge, the drawbacks are the difficulty of getting the correct
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and focusing on the most important
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.
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, people may feel tired of receiving mass
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from various
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sources, leading to negligence and indifference toward the world and the country’s affairs.
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, much of today’s
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focus on unimportant gossip or trivial things, wasting people’s time a lot.
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, I live in Taiwan, and every day the
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in our country is about some unknown people’s sexual life or some celebrities’ private life, which don’t positively impact us. Suppose we can have more significant
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,
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as climate change or the global economy. In that case, our civilians may pay more attention to the critical issues that must be addressed.
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, because the
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and
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often focus wrongly, we spend too much of our attention on gossiping or unimportant things, causing adverse effects on our minds in the long run. In conclusion,
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the above arguments, I believe today’s
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and
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adversely influence us, exhaust us, and numb us.
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