You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Ask your friend to send you a particular photograph Explain why you need that particular photograph Tell your friend what happened to your copy of it
Dear Payal,
I hope you're doing well. I was wondering if you could send me the recent photograph we had during our trip to Manali.
Do you remember the pic we captured in the snow? We were playing in the snow and we tried to climb to the top of the mountain, and one of the well-wishers clicked a picture for us.
I enjoyed that moment a lot and it was the first time I visited Manali and have seen the snow.
Moreover
, I guess it was our first journey together, so it was a very memorable moment for me. Hence
, I wanted to have a copy of such
a memory with me for a lifetime, so when I grow old, I can remember the unforgettable memory and show it to my kids!
Although
I had a copy of that with me, but, unfortunately, it got washed off with rain, making it visibly unappealing. I don't want to miss such
a moment and would like to have a record of it with me. I would highly appreciate it if you could send it to my home address, which I believe you already know!
Thank you once again for this
kind of wonderful trip and will plan such
adventurous moments more in the future.
Best wishes,
MitaliSubmitted by mdpadiya10 on
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Coherence
Consider breaking down longer sentences into shorter ones for better readability. This will enhance the coherence of your writing.
Task Response
Make sure that all necessary points are addressed concisely at the beginning for clarity and task achievement.
Task Response
Excellent use of friendly and personal tone, suitable for this type of letter.
Coherence
The letter has a clear structure and includes a greeting and closing, which enhances coherence.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite