The pie chart below shows the amount of money that a chldren's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year
The given bar chart illustrates the percentages of income
sources
and the proportion of spending from a children’s charity located in the USA in a year.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the biggest proportion of revenue sources
is from donated food, while
the largest amount of money from charity is used for program services. Moreover
, the total of charity earning sources
is higher than the total of expenditures.
Looking at the information in more detail, the majority of revenue sources
is from donated food at more than 86%. Then
followed by sources
from community contribution and program revenue at 10.4% and 2.2% respectively. Finally
, the rest of sources
Correct article usage
the sources
wich
Correct your spelling
which
is
less than 1% Correct subject-verb agreement
are
is
from investment income, government grants, and other income.
As Correct subject-verb agreement
are
regrards
expenditures, almost all expenses are used for program services at around 95%. Correct your spelling
regards
Then
, nearly 5% of expenditures is
allocated for fundraising and management and general.Change the verb form
are
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