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In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Shopping on the internet is gradually becoming more popular than consumption
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off-line. I tend to believe that
this
 is a positive development.
Firstly
, it needs to be clarified that shopping online can save lots of time. The online shopping platform can help
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 the goods into different categories with labels,
thus
 we can view all the information and details.
This
 process can help us to choose and search
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favors
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 faster. Once we
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 in a specific product, the next stage is paying the money and
waiting
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 the delivery. The whole process will be no longer than 3 minutes.
By comparison
, shopping in stores needs inhabitants to leave
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 house, take
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transport,
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the shops one by one. These will normally waste more than 6 hours and need to take the risk regarding buying nothing. In another perspective, online shopping may facilitate
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economic growth. It is all because opening an online shop can save lots of money
such
 as house rent, extra
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cost
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 and fees
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by
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 taking transport to
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.
Thus
, many small businesses can keep survival and
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 of products may be cultivated. As the choices of
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goods increase, the will of consumption by citizens will rise dramatically. Through the basic economic theory, as
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 expenditure
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, the GDP of
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 country may increase, which is economic growth. We are already in an information era
therefore
 internet is becoming more and more convenient than before. Shopping online is inevitable, and it makes our lives easier and brings more warfare
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unparalleled convenience
  • remote areas
  • wide range of products
  • broad selection
  • price comparison
  • customer satisfaction
  • value for money
  • impact on local businesses
  • economic diversity
  • job losses
  • environmental implications
  • packaging waste
  • carbon emissions
  • carbon footprint
  • data privacy
  • cybersecurity
  • personal data
  • tactile shopping experience
  • immediate gratification
  • physically examined
  • robust measures
  • consumer information
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