More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions?
In
this
modern era, soft drinks
are so popular among youngsters. More and more people consuming sugar-based beverages. This
is led to many health-related problems. There are many reasons why individuals likes
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like
drink
this
beverage. I will discuss in
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this in
further
paragraph and also
suggest some steps to reduce this
consumption.
There are several reason
why humans consumed sugar-based Change to a plural noun
reasons
drinks
more. Firstly
, the main reason is advertising. The companies have doing very big promotional. They spend millions and billions to show their ads on television, holdings and newspaper. Also
, they have picked big stars that have a face value among the viewers. For instance
, a big company named Thumsup use Salman Khan as a brand ambassador. In addition
, a person who was admired by Salman Khan then
he also
started to drink
this
Thumsup. Another major reason is youth consuming drinks
for only showing their friends and other people. They show their standard and lifestyle by drinking this
. These days, a famous American brand Redbull is so popular among the 20's.
There are many ways to reduce this
consumption. The first step is
taken by parents. Keep their child away from this
kind of drink
. Because this
is very addictive. Once your kid was consuming this
drink
, he was not able to quit drinking. So that in the early stage, parents give healthy juices such
as fruit juice, vegetable juice and coconut water. And also
sugar cane juice because it has pure natural sugar. The Government increases the tax on these beverages. So people can not buy them. Authority can spread awareness in societies so that the masses are aware of drinking.
To conclude
, there are many reasons why sugary drinks
are admired by mankind. However
, many steps are taken to mitigate this
problem.Submitted by arshpreetmalkana on
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