More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions?

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In
this
modern era, soft
drinks
are so popular among youngsters. More and more people consuming sugar-based beverages.
This
is led to many health-related problems. There are many reasons why individuals
likes
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to
drink
this
beverage. I will discuss
in
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this in
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a
further
paragraph and
also
suggest some steps to reduce
this
consumption. There are several
reason
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why humans consumed sugar-based
drinks
more.
Firstly
, the main reason is advertising. The companies have doing very big promotional. They spend millions and billions to show their ads on television, holdings and newspaper.
Also
, they have picked big stars that have a face value among the viewers.
For instance
, a big company named Thumsup use Salman Khan as a brand ambassador.
In addition
, a person who was admired by Salman Khan
then
he
also
started to
drink
this
Thumsup. Another major reason is youth consuming
drinks
for only showing their friends and other people. They show their standard and lifestyle by drinking
this
. These days, a famous American brand Redbull is so popular among the 20's. There are many ways to reduce
this
consumption.
The first step is
taken by parents. Keep their child away from
this
kind of
drink
. Because
this
is very addictive. Once your kid was consuming
this
drink
, he was not able to quit drinking. So that in the early stage, parents give healthy juices
such
as fruit juice, vegetable juice and coconut water. And
also
sugar cane juice because it has pure natural sugar. The Government increases the tax on these beverages. So people can not buy them. Authority can spread awareness in societies so that the masses are aware of drinking.
To conclude
, there are many reasons why sugary
drinks
are admired by mankind.
However
, many steps are taken to mitigate
this
problem.
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