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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

#museums #charge #admission #people
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As all
people
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 know,
museums
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 are one of the most important historical backgrounds of countries that
people
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 by visiting them can become aware of the history of the past of countries.
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 many
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 require an entrance fee, others are free. In
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 the benefits and drawbacks of charging
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 will be discussed. There are many advantages to charging
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 to visit
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.
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, there are many
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 that work for
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 namely, managers, staff, and security. So, the
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 that comes from selling tickets can cover salaries.
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, monuments, paintings, and customs need to be maintained, and because the cost of maintenance of some of them is too high, the
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 of charging
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 helps.
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, with that
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museums
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 can provide extra services.
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, making some 3D videos about the past, or translating descriptions of historical events to other countries can have a positive effect on attracting
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.
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, there are some disadvantages to getting
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 from
people
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 to visit
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. Some
people
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 would not afford tickets.
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, the number of visitors may become low,
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 artworks need maintenance and because there are few
people
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 who visit that place it can be hard to keep them in a good way. Another reason is that places like art galleries may be overcrowded.
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, controlling and monitoring
people
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 would be hard, and the risk of damaging artwork may increase. In conclusion,
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 the drawbacks of allowing free access to
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 as overcrowding and lack of maintenance
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 funds, in my view, I believe the benefits of accepting levies
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 as improved facilities and sources of revenue for the government outweigh the disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Admission fee
  • Revenue stream
  • Maintenance
  • Overcrowding
  • Commercialization
  • Cultural heritage
  • Diverse attendance
  • Community ownership
  • Access to culture
  • Visitor experience
  • Exhibit quality
  • Cultural mission
  • Reliance on funding
  • Government subsidies
  • Cultural accessibility
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