You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, •explain why you will be visiting the town •give details of where you will be staying •ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment
Dear Nidhi,
I am writing to ask you for some suggestions about a place where you spent the
last
three years of your life.
As you already know, I recently got a job in a travel company. Yesterday, I received an email from my manager to attend a meeting in 'Jaipur' next Wednesday, on behalf of my institution, so I immediately recognized your name as you have done your graduation from there.
Cherry on the cake is that the whole trip is sponsored by the company. They already sent me details of the hotel. I’m going to stay in. Its name is “ The Kentish Hotel “. As per Google reviews, it is quite a popular and luxurious destination to stay.
By the way, the meeting is organized in the same hotel, I mentioned earlier and it is located near to University you went to. Be grateful if you could suggest to me some places where I can spend my leisure time. If you know any places, let me know soon.
Keep in touch,
Your best friend,
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You might want to include more specific details about the kind of evening entertainment you are looking for (e.g., restaurants, theaters, pubs). This will help your friend give more tailored recommendations.
coherence cohesion
Ensure there is a smooth flow between the explanation of your trip and the request for recommendations. Adding a sentence or two to bridge these sections could enhance readability.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are very appropriate, creating a warm and friendly tone.
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The letter provides a clear reason for visiting and includes relevant details about the stay, establishing a strong context.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a single point, facilitating easy understanding.
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The tone throughout the letter is friendly and suitable for writing to a friend.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,