You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You know find that you cannot continue the course. Write the letter to the course tutor. In your letter: -Describe your situation -Explain why you cannot continue at this time -Say what action you would like to do

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Good afternoon, dear sir/madam. I'

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Anastassia, my student ID number is 12345. I'

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participating in the "Management in the Health System" course. I'

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writing

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letter with the purpose of explaining my issues and asking for your advice. I'

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learning

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my full-time job as the staff manager in our hospital. For the

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two weeks, we have had a lot of work and

man

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extra hours than usual. We are waiting for a commission from the head office, it takes at least more 3 weeks to settle all the issues and to find solutions for all the problems.

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, it seems to be worse, so I'll have not enough time to breathe, all the more so to continue my study. I'

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very interested in continuing

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course when it is suitable for me. I have to say, it's the best course with the best tutors I have ever studied. Now

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, I wanted to ask your advice as to what can I do with

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issue. I understand, that I can't get my money back. But if it's possible to freeze my account for three or 4 months, I'll be happy. Sincerely yours. Anastassia

anastasiaFri Aug 16 2024

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coherence cohesion

Consider dividing the large block of text into smaller paragraphs for better readability and to clearly separate each idea.

task achievement

Ensure that the reasons for not continuing the course and the requested action are stated a bit more clearly and succinctly to enhance comprehension.

coherence cohesion

Your greeting and closing are polite and appropriate for a formal letter.

task achievement

The letter conveys a respectful and professional tone suitable for the context.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

196 words

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