Global warming is one of the biggest threats human face in the 21st century, and sea levels are increasing at the alarm rates. What are the main problems associated with this and what are the potential solutions to deal with ?

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affect the health of

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but it

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impacts the living aspects. Somehow, there are many reasons why

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global warming appears as a huge

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humans. The increasing

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of operating factories might assist

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of residue in creating polluted

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in their system producing fatal impacts

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environment

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is the lack of nature support. Some

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still perform massive logging, land invasions, and other jeopardy to

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nature for their own business.

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could harm the life of nature

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definitely support

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reducing the world's temperature.

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still have the hope to fight

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can start to change their lifestyle. For

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example,

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can be replaced by using a less

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as manual fans.

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,

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still have the opportunity to re-design their

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to reduce the usage of

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electronics

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as

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. Continuously,

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can start to campaign

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healthy life by gathering and educating

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society about how important to remain a healthy lifestyle without using any harmful tools and products.

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global warming increases at speed yet

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have the solutions to repeal

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issue.

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, all the visionary solutions that

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have will assist to

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maintain

the

earth

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and remain healthy care in human

civiliation

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civilisation

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