Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Since a few years ago ,several aspects of our lives have changed . Nowadays, having more
options
is a major change for some individuals . In my point of view , I agree with the statement due to
introduction
of numerous goods and services available to enjoy.
On the one hand , too many areas are improved Correct article usage
the introduction
everyday
, Replace the word
every day
then
,more and more option
are available to Fix the agreement mistake
options
community
. Add an article
the community
For instance
, regarding healthcare , the birth- control options
has
exponentially increased during the Change the verb form
have
last
few years . In term
of technology , there has been in the past people are deal with the computer only in businesses ,Fix the agreement mistake
terms
in
these days they have Change preposition
apply
smart phones
,Correct your spelling
smartphones
laptop
,Fix the agreement mistake
laptops
ipad
available Correct your spelling
iPad
in
Change preposition
at
the
work . Correct article usage
apply
Furthermore
, the means of travelling are increased thanks to transportation improvements , through establish
more underground trains ,commuting by public transport , Change the verb form
establishing
traveling
by plane and driving electric Change the spelling
travelling
automachines
Correct your spelling
auto machines
consequently
, increasing
in Correct article usage
an increasing
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
options
will result in a competitions
between companies and Correct the article-noun agreement
a competition
competitions
diminishing
in their prices.
Correct article usage
a diminishing
On the other hand
, there were fewer economic trades in the past. People were only buying local products which was a unique options
in these cities . Change the noun form
option
For example
, seasonal foods are cheaper than foreign products which make
Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
it
unaffordable for many individuals . Correct pronoun usage
them
In addition
, we are living a different experience, new generation recieving
all kinds of Correct your spelling
receiving
detials
through social media Correct your spelling
details
such
as facebook
and youtube which easiest Capitalize word
Facebook
the
way for understanding all the Correct article usage
a
review
about the item before purchasing it .
In conclusion , there are many activities , items and even food Fix the agreement mistake
reviews
were
not available to people in Correct pronoun usage
that were
the
previous years because there were more expensive or Correct article usage
apply
more
nonexistent . Correct quantifier usage
apply
However
, the world we belong have alter
Change the verb form
altered
the
lifestyle recently by introducing modern facilities Change the word
our
include
new gadgets and public transport .Wrong verb form
including
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