Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Since a few years ago ,several aspects of our lives have changed . Nowadays, having more
options
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is a major change for some individuals . In my point of view , I agree with the statement
due to
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introduction
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of numerous goods and services available to enjoy. On the one hand , too many areas are improved
everyday
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,
then
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,more and more
option
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options
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are available to
community
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the community
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.
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, regarding healthcare , the birth- control
options
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has
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exponentially increased during the
last
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few years . In
term
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terms
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of technology , there has been in the past people are deal with the computer only in businesses ,
in
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these days they have
smart phones
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smartphones
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,
laptop
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laptops
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,
ipad
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iPad
available
in
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the
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work .
Furthermore
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, the means of travelling are increased thanks to transportation improvements , through
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more underground trains ,commuting by public transport ,
traveling
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travelling
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by plane and driving electric
automachines
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auto machines
consequently
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,
increasing
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an increasing
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in
number
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of
options
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will result in
a competitions
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a competition
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between companies and
diminishing
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a diminishing
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in their prices.
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, there were fewer economic trades in the past. People were only buying local products which was a unique
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options
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in these cities .
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, seasonal foods are cheaper than foreign products which
make
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makes
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it
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them
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unaffordable for many individuals .
In addition
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, we are living a different experience, new generation
recieving
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receiving
all kinds of
detials
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details
through social media
such
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as
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and youtube which easiest
the
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a
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way for understanding all the
review
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reviews
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about the item before purchasing it . In conclusion , there are many activities , items and even food
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that were
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not available to people in
the
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apply
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previous years because there were more expensive or
more
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nonexistent .
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, the world we belong have
alter
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altered
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the
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our
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lifestyle recently by introducing modern facilities
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new gadgets and public transport .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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