You live in a small apartment building. You are frequently bothered by noise from your upstairs neighbor’s apartment. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: Describe the situation Explain why it is a problem for you Suggest a solution.

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Dear Neighbor, I am writing

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letter to inform you that the noise pollution from upstairs bothers me every day. I have been facing

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issue for the

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month.

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, the reason behind

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noise is the high volume of music during the late night.

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, I think you prefer to listen to songs loudly but our apartment is small ,

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, it is easy to hear your music when it is quite loud.

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, I am unable to sleep. In fact, being a full-time employee, I need proper sleep to focus on my work.

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this

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problem is not only affecting my health but

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decreasing my chance of getting a promotion at work.

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, I would like to suggest that if you like to listen to music, either prefer to listen at low volume or you can use headphones.

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, I hope you

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understand my problem and will work on it. Yours sincerely, Simran

simranjot0002Sat May 04 2024

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Coherence and Cohesion

Consider varying your sentence structure to enhance readability and keep the reader engaged.

Task Achievement

For future letters, including specific examples or times when the noise was particularly disturbing could strengthen your argument by providing concrete evidence of the disruption.

Coherence and Cohesion

You provided a clear structure with a logical flow of ideas, which made your letter easy to follow.

Task Achievement

You successfully articulated the problem, its impact on you, and suggested a polite solution, showing a good understanding of the task.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

160 words

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