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A friend told you recently that he/she had gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will be suitable for your birthday party next week. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend about your planned party ask what the restaurant is called and for directions to get there ask what kind of food it serves and if your friend has any particular recommendations from the menu You should You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Pat

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Dear Pat, I am writing in regard to my 30th birthday which is coming up next week and I would like to host a small celebration with 25 close friends and family. In your previous conversation, you mentioned an excellent family restaurant that you recently visited on your anniversary in uptown Waterloo. So, I was wondering about having a party there and I would love to know a few details about it. As a host of the party, I have planned for a small game session followed by lunch and
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 a cake ceremony. It will begin at 11am and will be done by 2pm. I would like to confirm the same with the restaurant manager, so I would appreciate it if you could provide me their name and full address of location.
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, can you specify the cuisine it serves and if there is any particular dish that you like from the menu
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 Hope to hear back from you. Regards, Mayuri

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task achievement
Provide a more detailed and clear introduction about the party—the purpose and any special theme it may have to enhance engagement.
coherence cohesion
Consider structuring paragraphs to maintain a single clear idea per paragraph for more streamlined communication.
coherence cohesion
The letter includes a polite and clear greeting and closing, making it formally apt.
task achievement
The tone is friendly and suits the purpose of the personal, informal letter.
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