The table below compares the data for the world’s large-scale and small-scale sea fishing industries.

The table presents various information about the major industries and minor businesses of sea fishery of the world.

It is clear that

while

there are fewer employees working for large-scale industries, the salary paid for those is much higher.

Besides

, the fuel consumed by small-scale ones every year is less as well. As can be seen, fishing boats are recorded to be at the top of the list with 120

million

workers, compared to 500 thousand of the figure in industrial ships.

However

, despite the number of staff, smaller boats can only produce 24

million

tonnes of annual catch for food service,

whereas

bigger ones not only contribute 29

million

tonnes of fish for food but

also

million

tonnes for other industrial processes.

Moreover

, the yearly wage for people who work on ships is more generous with the amount from 25000 pounds to 350000 pounds.

By contrast

, the payment for those on boats stands at just 200-3000 pounds per year.

In addition

, the annual fuel/oil consumption of big-scale companies is 65000 gallons, in comparison with 8500 gallons in small-scale businesses.

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