The table shows the number of people (millions) that remain undernourished around the world from 2000 to 2009. The chart displays the global price of two food grains over the same period. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table and line graph illustrate the number of
people
with insufficient amount
of food worldwide Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
form
2000 to 2009 and Correct your spelling
from
value
of grains in terms of Correct article usage
the value
dollars
per ton
throughout the same period
respectively.
Overall
, an increasing trend was experienced during the period
in quantity of undernourished people
. Peak price was reached by the end of the period
, whereas
the opposite position was taken in the year 2000.
The number of individuals suffering from hunger increased gradually. Initially
, quantity
of undernourished Add an article
the quantity
a quantity
people
comprised for
857 Change preposition
apply
million
. In 2 years, an increase of 5 million
people
occured
. Correct your spelling
occurred
Then
, by 2004, the amount starving members of society had grown to 873 million
. In 2006 and 2008 increases of 3 million
and 38 million
of
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apply
people
made up a total of 924 millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
of
malnourished Change preposition
apply
people
. During the final year
the number of Add a comma
,year
people
with insufficient amount of food skyrocketed to 1024 million
.
The price of rice
and wheat
varied during the period
. Both of these grains cost 200 dollars
oer
Correct your spelling
per
ton
initially
. While
the value
of rice
remained stable until 2004, wheat
had
experienced Unnecessary verb
apply
grow
of 200 and Replace the word
growth
decrease
of 100 Correct article usage
a decrease
of
Change preposition
apply
dollars
. By 2006 both grains' value
were equal to approximately 300 Fix the agreement mistake
values
dollars
per ton
. Then
, the price of those products skyrocketed substantially. Value
of Correct article usage
The value
rice
and wheat
made up 800 and 700 dollars
per ton
respectively. By the end of the period
, the cost of rice
per ton
rose to about 1150 million
and wheat
to 900 million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, value, dollars, ton, period, million, rice, wheat with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "skyrocketed" was used 2 times.
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