The chart below shows the gross domestic product of four different countries in 2005 and 2010.

The chart indicates the gross domestic products in Japan, the USA, the UK and China between 2010 and 2015.

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, The USA and China experienced a gradual item increase except for Japan.

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, the UK remained constant.

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The USA had the highest gross home resources with $10000 in 2010.

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, from the year 2011, there was a slow

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in the materials to over $16000 in 5 years.

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was followed by China which had over $5000 worth of products at the beginning of the period but changed steadily reaching about $11000 in 2015. Interestingly, Japan started with just over $5000 and remained the same for 2 years

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declined for the next 3 years ending with about $4900 in 2015.

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, the UK maintained its gross products at about $2.500 over the whole period.

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Jul 13, 2023

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