The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of fish is called salmon.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of fish is called salmon.
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The diagrams display information about the lifespan of
salmon
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.
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, it is evident from the illustration that
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is a cyclic process and is composed of three stages which start from the egg stage and end up as an adult. All cycles happen in different places. At first glance,
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fish lays eggs on the reeds where there are
also
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a large number of small stones. The water of the upper
river
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usually moves slowly and, in
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state, eggs lie here for approximately 5 to 6 months. Once it has been hatched, the fry which is 3 to 8 cm long moves to the lower
river
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which flows faster as compared to the upper
river
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. In
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river
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, it lives around about 4 years but later it is ready for living its
life
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in the ocean. In
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part of
life
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, fry becomes smolt which has a length between 12-15 cm.
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small fish survives in the open sea for a long time and spends most of its
life
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here. It takes 5 years before the smolt is grown into adult
Salmon
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and at
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point, its length is 7 to 76 cm in total.
This
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salmon
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again lays eggs on plants and the
life
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cycle of a new
Salmon
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fish begins from here.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, river, life with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "moves" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Life cycle
  • Spawning
  • Freshwater
  • Juvenile
  • Fry
  • Adaptation
  • Migration
  • Smolt
  • Rivers
  • Ocean
  • Challenge
  • Growth
  • Return journey
  • Hatching ground
  • Perilous
  • Upstream
  • Obstacle
  • Ecological impact
  • Preservation
  • Disturbance
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