Some people think that we should replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant experience from your own experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Architecture
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plays an important role in
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the
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development of a city. Not surprisingly, there are a lot of debates about whether old
buildings
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should be replaced with modern ones or,
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, protected. I am inclined to support the second viewpoint since old
architecture
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attracts
tourists
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.
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, both views will be discussed in
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essay.
Due to
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fast urbanization within the
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few decades, the need for new houses and offices has increased significantly. Here modern
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offers a number of solutions with its skyscrapers or small, but multifunctional constructions.
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, these new
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might make streets look homogenised.
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, in order to build them historical
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might need to be demolished, which might put
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off from visiting
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places.
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, if old cottages, houses and towers will be protected and restored,
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would attract people from all over the world to visit them and enjoy the atmosphere of the era they were built in.
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, the local economy will flourish.
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, the number of
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visiting the old city of Rome every year illustrates that
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always prefer places with a long history to new ones.
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all of the above,
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modern
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offers a solution to the lack of space problem in megapolises, preserving old
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is more likely to save and develop tourism. From my point of view, tourism is one of the integral parts of economic prosperity.
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, I agree with the second opinion and I think local authorities should follow
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strategy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • paramount
  • evolutionary journey
  • tangible link
  • fostering
  • sense of belonging
  • architectural beauty
  • economic benefit
  • tourist attractions
  • preservation techniques
  • structural integrity
  • energy-efficient
  • sustainable architecture
  • cultural preservation
  • urban demands
  • contemporary lifestyles
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