The map shows the comparison of changes in the library before and after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Write within 150 words.

The map shows the comparison of changes in the library before and after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Write within 150 words.
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The map illustrates how the
library
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changed over a 5-year period. Generally,
it is clear that
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the
library
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witnessed a significant modernization. Most noticeably, the increase in the number of
tables
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and types of books, and the appearance of the children’s area and computers. In detail, 5 years ago, there were only 2 types of books on the bookshelf, namely self-help and history.
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, after the transformation, there existed other kinds
such
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as fiction, kitchen, economics, and law.
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,
instead
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of having 8 small
tables
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in the past, the
library
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changed into 4 long
tables
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in the middle of it. Films and DVDs took the place of newspapers and periodicals on the big shelf on the right of the
tables
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. It is
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worth mentioning that the area for children was opened between the table and the bookshelf for children, which used to be the place for fiction. Lying opposite the stairs was the position for computers, one of the remarkable developments of the
library
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, tables with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • comparison
  • significant changes
  • modernize
  • technological facilities
  • computer stations
  • digital book borrowing
  • interactive learning
  • family-friendly spaces
  • cafe or lounge area
  • social interaction
  • open spaces
  • flexible seating arrangements
  • collaborative work
  • community events
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