Intelligent machines such as robots are widely applied to take the place of human beings. Please discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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It is true that artificial intelligence
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considered broadly to take positions of
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. There are several benefits and drawbacks of intelligent
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machineries
. On the one hand,
machines
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with intelligence
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to be
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advantageous
that
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can create some facilities for humankind.
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,
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the help of these
robots
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, computers and other
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devices
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,
people
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can save time and energy in order to achieve their targets.
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some kind of work with
arificial
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artificial
artificially
intelligent
machine
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machines
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,
people
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could cope with earlier and without
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help.
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,
robots
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are created with accurate
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. As
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consequence, they manage to calculate
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with accurate data.
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, like computer
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,
people
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do not
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succeed
in doing simultaneously that
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could
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fulfil
two or more tasks automatically at the same time.
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,
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kind of
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have
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also
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their own detrimental effects. First and foremost, in some developed countries, there are higher unemployment rates because of automatic intelligent
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.
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, some of them are likely to be unfriendly to the
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environment
since they require
electisity
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electricity
or fuel.
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,
robots
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and other
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work with petrol and other fuel.
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but not least, without their fuel and energy, these
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could not do anything,
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people
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are able to do some work without the need
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the
texnology
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technology
. In conclusion, artificial intelligent
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have not only their beneficial sides, but they
also
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create some detriments at the same time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • innovation
  • operational efficiency
  • precision
  • accuracy
  • hazardous
  • technological advancement
  • displacement
  • skill gap
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