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Many people try to achieve a work-life balance but fail. Why is this happening? What can be done to help people overcome this problem?

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In
this
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 competitive world, Work has occupied more than half of the day and living a relaxing
life
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 has to wait till it weekend. Mostly
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 financial constraints and the high standard of living as cause
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 problem. Which will most likely put an adult into depression if any necessary steps are not followed for maintaining a work-
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 balance. I will examine the problem and provide solutions for it. High inflation is one of the problems which has created
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 issue, followed by living a materialistic lifestyle. In today's era, people tend to purchase expensive things just to make themselves superior over others which leads to an unfamiliar financial crisis and overtime working
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 are
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 included.
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, what happens is most individuals fail to create a balance between enjoying their
life
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 rather than slogging their
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 in offices for maintaining a flattering lifestyle.
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, the majority of the public doesn't seek to make a boundary between their professional
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 and personal
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.
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 as attending calls after working
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 will distract and take away the time which was supposed to be spent on themselves perhaps the same
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 working on office
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 spending the time on personal
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 will be unfair as well. That's why it all comes down to finding strict boundaries which will help them overcome
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 issue. To succinctly summarize, Avoiding a flattery lifestyle and rather living a
life
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 of modesty where people don't care about others but themselves and creating a boundary between working
hours
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 and personal space-time will benefit individuals in sustaining a proper work-
life
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 balance.
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