The graph below shows how people buy music.

The graph below shows how people buy music.
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This
line chart depicts the proportion of three ways how people buy music by downloads,
streams
and purchase CDs from 2011 to 2018 .It is clear from the graph that the most common way is
streams
which is 40.
According to
what is shown,sales of the
streams
increased gradually until reached 40 in 2018
while
the figure for downloads begin at 35 in 2011 and climbed slightly until reached 45 in 2014
then
witnessed a drop to 30 from 2014 to 2018 .The
Last
way people get music is by buying CDs ,in 2011 experienced the highest percentage at 55% and
then
decline sharply to 25 approximately.
To sum up
we could say that , the most preferable way people buy music is by purchasing CDs and the least least preferable is by
streams
.
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